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Tuesday, June 21, 2011

A long course of Silence

We walking along a long course of Silence
Holding hands, making our own life balance
Without saying a word you understand me
I was all alone, found you standing behind me

When you just came in my life I wonder what you really see in me
Still I need you, feel your touch, feel your love and can feel you in me
You saying you understand me but I am still trying to understand you
You read my eyes, read my feelings, read my silence, its only about you

Leaning my head on your strong shoulder is my first step towards you
By holding my hands and my body the level of the love raising by you
Going ahead making footprints on the sand we don't want to look behind
I never thought it could be like this though beech love is always in my mind

My heart is so pouring with love want to tell you more and more
You speak, your heart speaks, even your eyes speaks more and more
Don't want to blink my eyes, don't want to see the nature around
Just want to be with you, talk in silence with eyes nothing surround

As we reached near by a big stone you stopped and turned towards me
I am really unaware what is in your mind and what coming next to me
You just make me feel special as you go down to your knee there
Expecting you to tell me three words breaking the long silence there

Only i heard is some buzzing sound aside by which silence is actually breaks
I stop the sound of stupid alarm from my cell phone i keep giving it slaps
Ohh GOD that was nothing but as usual only in my mind another dream
When this dream come true when I'd found you that was literally a loud scream
  ~'~hn~'~
(This Poem is Dedicated to Sancheeta Biswas Who gave me the Title and the Idea as an inspiration to Write this Poem)

16 comments:

fantacy in practicality said...

silence in dreams, good concept. buzzing of the clock kept the three words unsaid , hope he says it to you in real someday, in silence:)) good write up, keep it up.

Hema Nimbekar said...

Thank you Sancheeta but credit goes to you..you give this Idea of Silence....Thank to you...love you...

Simran said...

''A log course of Silence'' Wonderful topic :)..and a wonderful write up by you. it's something hat ke ;) ...nice

Hema Nimbekar said...

yeah simran....for topic/title thanks to Sancheeta...

yeah content in this poem is truly from my heart...thank you sweetie for such a valuable words of appreciation...:):)

Motifs said...

welcome back Hema..missed u..loved your new style of writing,a total new you..and I hope that someday,you will find what you are looking for..in this very silence.

Rimly said...

That was a good concept Sancheeta gave you Hema and you expressed it beautifully in your poem.

http://rimlybezbaruah.blogspot.com/2011/06/story-of-manypart-ii.html

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Motifs

Thank you Alpana di...love you <3

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Rimly
yeah thank to her....and thank you for reading and appreciating my poem..

I will read you post soon..

Geeta Singh said...

liked it Hema :) keep it up Dear

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Geeta Singh

....WELCOME TO MY BLOG...
Thank you dear

IRFANUDDIN said...

life goes this way only understanding each other...and believe me i never ever blinked my eyes through out the read bcoz it was so nice while reading it.

Hema Nimbekar said...

@IRFANUDDIN

Thank you for much of love...:):)

forjenssake said...

Sometimes silence speaks louder than anything else. I enjoyed this and am now following.

Hema Nimbekar said...

@forjenssake

....WELCOME TO MY BLOG.....
Thank you so much..

melissa said...

Oh Hema...the body speaks in dreams. Words are used in reality. So that makes dreams deeper...and more engaging. For the first time, I've read something on silence and its as magical as the words you used in your poetry...

loved it!

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Melissa

Thank you dear..yeah it is like magical dream....

How u find my blog??

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