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Thursday, April 21, 2011

First manager paid by none

Once on a time when GOD already created the Earth.
He created water to drink, sun to light and air to breath.
Then he created plants, animals and all other beautiful nature.
He took a break whiles he wanted to make his best creature.
He was tired He just for fun gave all his emotions, values and brain.
He thought its enough time for that break and back to his work again.
He made its best creature and named all it human who live in his world with peace.
After that he turned to his other creation which he made in break is really a masterpiece.
He took a look and smile over it as he just sight his most beautiful, stunning and best production.
He knew it he cannot make it over again and again thats why he introduced new concept of reproduction.

His masterpiece is indeed a masterpiece but the other creature of its own doesn't know how to treat her.
They think she is a GOD gift for them to have a fun, they can use her as they want to so they take her.
The man took the woman and greet her as his wife.
He promised GOD that she will be with him for his whole life.
He promised to care of her, love her, understand her and never to be harsh with her.
First he took good care of her as he promised he is always busy to treat her and fun with her.

GOD was confused that He made human to take care of his whole world.
But human is always busy with the Gift GOD has gifted to him as an award.
Now he wanted to add some business in this world.
He asked to all to be managed and organized his world.
Man was asked too but he is busy in his own work.
Woman listen the GOD and say yes for that work.
She asked to be a first manager and the man's boss.
She said yes and proudly accepted all the Gain and Loss.

GOD made man to be her labour.
She can ask to man for her any favour.
But she already fallen in love of her man.
How can she ask a favour from her man.
She has to do all her stuff's her own.
So she asked her man to go out and earn.

Man go to forest to find some food but he was always busy to see all the world and explored it more.
She worked whole day she was washing, cooking, child caring, farming, petting, water fetching and more.
When man came with little food he earned by exploring the world.
She was the happiest one to know how hard her man has worked.
She asked him to take a rest after they had some talk, drink and food.
But he never ask her what she had done and he never in that of mood.

She knew she has to manage it herself without asking him to do so.
Becoz he already say no to GOD he never can organize manage the same though.
She knew she is not gaining anything excepts the pain.
But she is happy when he loved her for his own fun gain.
She never complaint it as she knew she cannot complaint to anybody.
She herself took initiative to be manager she will ask him when he is ready.

But he never ready to be asked even when he is to be asked he said.
He is not here to do all these things he has to be in that outside world.
He said to her that she is gentle, she is beautiful she has to be in his careness.
There is nothing in outside world for her as he knew it is nothing a selfishness.
He doesn't want to lose his freedom, his enjoyment, his adventurousness.
He just say to her that she is too soft, gentle and tendered to be seen all that harshness.

Is really a woman is too weak as she looked.
No she is much stronger in inner as she tooked.
GOD knows what she faced what she has done.
Since from starting She is the first manager paid by none.


Kunal Verma said...

Nice one.

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Kunal Verma
thank you very much..

JIM said...

Really well done..great writing..I love the concept and the execution.. I started following you

Hema Nimbekar said...

thanks for following and encouraging by writing...

keep visiting..

Mary said...

Hema, the truth so delicately put into words. I enjoyed your post and will return to see what lovlies you come up with :)

Hema Nimbekar said...

thanks for visiting...

keep visiting..

Motifs said...

Woman was created from the rib of man.
She was not made from his head to be above him,
nor was she made from his feet to be trampled on.
She was created out of his side to equal him,
under his arm to be protected by him
and near his heart to be loved.
Loved your Post..Hema..I wish this could be heard by all.

Hema Nimbekar said...



thanks are very much true....Indeed Woman was created from the rib of man.

your point is noticed and agreed..

Rachit said...

lovely.. and amazingly true.. :)

Hema Nimbekar said...


thank you...keep visiting...

Anonymous said...

loved this one so much.
u explained each and everything so beautifully...

Hema Nimbekar said...

@some unspoken words
Thanks dear...yeah this poem has so long long lines...i know..too much explanation...
thanks for your encouraging words...

keep visiting dear..

डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा said...

No she is much stronger in inner as she tooked

Hunnnn......True.. nice creation very well presented

Hema Nimbekar said...

@डॉ॰ मोनिका शर्मा

thank you very much...I m so honored by your beautiful comment...your words really matters to me...I m glad u liked my poem..


indeed the women working day n night at home to full fill the daily needs of their dear ones often go un-noticed and perhaps never get few words of appreciations from her dear ones..... very thought full post by you.


Vivek Jain said...

really explaining from old testament to the age...
so... soooo..Beautiful

विवेक जैन

Hema Nimbekar said...


thanks for encouraging my writing...

keep visiting.

Hema Nimbekar said...

@Vivek Jain

thanks for encouraging....

keep visiting..

Alcina said...

Superb and Your image works with the poetry is very much exemplary :)

Hema Nimbekar said...


thank you snehu...where were you these days..??

Simran said...

I loved that rhyming and the way you expressed it!
Images said it all..

Take care!!

Hema Nimbekar said...


Thank you so much simran...Love you....<3<3<3

How u find my blog??

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